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10/7/10 Student goes on shooting spree: My question is why? Why would a good respectfull brillant kid start firing shots out of no where? I think that this goes to show what this world is comming to. This should not be happing in the world we have today. He could have killed an innosent person due to his rage. I hear to many of these storys happing. I think its sad and people who went on these rampages should have thought about the people around them. I feel bad for this kids family and friends and hope I do not hear another story like this.


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9/17 i think that thomas was really stupid for trying to kill him self. whuy would he ever try to kill himself by jumping thats to painfull should of just used a gun. he could of landed on a person and not a car and killed an innisent person to. hope he has to pay for damage and charged for the crimes he has commited. maria should press charges for attempted murder because if she was in the car she could of been injured or killed


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