Gaelle+Gilles

9/15/10 New York City Miracle Landing:

Question is why is the owner of the //Dodger Charger// mad of the fact that the 22 year old destroyed her car? He wanted to die! The owner of the car should be happy that her car saved someone's life, like her husband, instead of saying "how he feels now that he made it. Does he feel like an idiot?" She could buy another car that is better than a //Dodge//, like a //BMW//, or get her car fix because death is something you can not fix. And who knows the 22 year old could do something later in his life, that he is now still living, and be proud of the fact that he is still living to see that day.

9/27/10

Teen gets banned from the U.S.:

English teen, Luke Angel, is banned from coming into the U.S. because he decided to send an abuse letter to President Obama. The reason behind the fact that Angel sent this letter to the Pres. is because of the 9/11 doucumentry he saw, which makes no sense at all. Also Angel says that at the time he was writing the letter to the Pres. he was 'drunk and high' and only remembers calling Obama 'a prick.' I don't believe that Angel was drunk and high while writing this letter because if he was, how was he able to think correctly?

P= Great job telling me in detail what happened first! C= I need more of what you think. This is still more of a summary.

10/7/10

Student goes on shooting spree I wonder why he did go shooting at a church and then shot at himself. I feel bad for the fact that he is dead and i wonder why he killed himself. It is sad to hear a young adult kill themselvs for no reason. The young adult's parents even wonder why he killed himelf, but i think that they have to look further into the life that their son has had and if they did anything to dissapoint him.


 * Spell check! That helps immensely. I'm glad you took heed of my comments before... but now I need a combo from you. Tell us what happened in the story and then tell me what you think without using the word "I." Your reaction at this level in high school is more of an analysis of the story than what you personally feel.**

11/2/10 The Iraq war has been going on for over seven years now and we wonder when it is going to stop. Over those years over 100,000 citizens from Iraq has died, some of the Iraqi's citizens have been tortured and killed by our soldiers, in which some of the killing were by ““trigger happy” American troops.”

When is it going to be over? War, war, war, everyday. We are just lucky that it is not here, but it’s worse for Iraq because they are going to be in so much debt by the time it is over, **if** the war ever ends. So many people have died in Iraq and mostly by us. When the information was released Geoff Morrell called it “shameful….could potentially undermine our nation’s security.” I have to agree with him. Our nation’s security is powerful and we don’t need a weakened one. Too many people have came into this country with bombs, we don’t need more.