jonathan+schuman

10-8-10

My reaction to the school shooting is astonished. I don't get how a student of that caliber would go on a shooting rampage. While others might be Eccentric about this, i for one is not. How could such a life be wasted? I think they need a full psychological screening of this person. That how i feel about the student shooting


 * Try to give a little more to your paragraph. You gave even less than the last time. Tell us what happened and then how you feel without saying "My reaction."**

9-15-10

My reaction to the child pornography in the pentigon is flabbergasted. I don't think goverment officlas have the right to use the computors that tax paiers money bought for anything other then benifitting the country, let alone download and save videos and pictures of things that theythemselves illegalized. If they feel hypocritical right now, they should. if they feel like they have the right to do somthing so innapropiate and taboo, then what stopping citizens from looking it up...o wait, THE LAW, which applies to all poeple, not just citzens. That is my reacation to child pornography in the pentigon.

P= You had some very valid arguments in your reaction. C= Spell check and capitalize the beginning of sentences! Try telling us a little more about the article and then tell us your reaction.