katherinegorski

10/7/10 - i think that truman should be a war hero because the nuclear bomb is the best way to get emnimies to back off. it is the most powerful bomb and i like that we were the first to use it. i dont like that it hurt so many people that it had nothing to do it with the war but it is the best defense system.


 * Spell check for sure. Also, try not using "I" so much. I think you can put a little more effort into the reaction. Tell us what happened and then react to it.**

9/15/10 Miracle landing - This what about a man attempting suicide by falling off a 40 foot apartment building, he broke his fall by landing on a park car. He survived with two broken legs a collasped lung and a shatterd ankle. My reaction to it was i felt terrible for the man i can only imagine what would have happen to make him feel this way. I think he's very lucky that he lived but i'm sure he's not to happy about it. He probably feels stupid for even trying to do that.


 * P= You did a nice job of setting up your reaction by giving us the details as to what happened in the story.**
 * C= Read your paragraphs out loud when you are done. You will make a lot of corrections yourself. Try not to say "My reaction," but instead just telling us what you think about the situation because we already know it is your reaction.**

9/20/10 Role Of Woman - This article was about Woman and there jobs and duties during the war. Since most of the men were sent off to fight in the war someone needed to fill there places and keep everything going, so woman started talking mens jobs while they were away and it led to a lot more. Lot's of woman were getting involved with this, it started out at being a waitress and led into working for the government. The woman took government jobs that usually men would be doing but since a lot of men were being shipped out to war someone had to do. This led to woman have more rights and more opens.