alex+petersen


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9/15/10

After reading the article about the man who jumped off a building and fell over 40 story's high and landed because of a dodge charger. I found this extremely interesting because if any other person did this they would probably die. this man had to be given a second chance cause i know if i did this than i would have died but i would never do this cause I'm smarter than that. but this man who wanted to end his life was shown that he was not supposed to die yet... since the woman who had her car totaled because of the man who tried to commit suicide. I personally think that the man will have to pay for the damages done to the car. In time this man will soon know that his life is very precious and he should cherish his life.


 * Your first sentence is a fragment. What did you feel or think about after reading the article? That should be present in the first sentence. Capitalize words at the beginning of each sentence. You can use the word "cause" in certain situations, but here you are looking for "because." You have a lot of ideas here, but in one paragraph you want to focus on one or two ideas and then support them with details from the article. Try that for next week!**