Corey+Bell

9/15/10

New York City Miracle Landing: after reading this article i was surprise at the fact that the guy actually tried to kill him self, but what makes it even better is that he failed his mission and ruined someones 14,000 dollar car and he also broke several bones in his body with a collapsed lung. I just want to how dumb does this guy have to be to try to kill himself and fail and make his situation worse then it already was. How does he feel's know after the fact that he nearly killed himself and is most likely going to be put into a mental facility for attempting to comitt suicide//.//


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 * Where are the other two posts?**