Corey+James


 * Where are your other two wiki posts?**

11/2/11 Gays/Lesbians Not Allowed To Adopt: How are you depriving a human-being that you did not create the opportunity to create a family of their own just because of their interest in the opposite sex? They cannot control their feelings and emotions, just like you cannot. The fact that people discriminate people for what they cannot control is completely ridiculous, and if you do so you are a weak person. Honestly, I must admit that sometimes gay people do may be feel uncomfortable, but they have every right to do what any of us have the opportunity to do. This world is nothing but a bunch of hypocrites.

11/2/11 School's Ranking Causes Teacher Death:

This seriously made me laugh; god forbid your teacher is ranked #1,344,421... Well I know we all hope so, maybe we can have less teachers. On the serious note, what could of been going through his mind when he found out he was ranked #6 in the school. He probably went into feudal position in a corner and drank a gallon of bleach because his life was so unfair and all the teacher bullies would nag, push, and shove him. It's not like the teacher with the highest ranking gets the highest payment, your all getting paid the same salary, whether your a bad teacher or not. There is so much he could of done to prevent this, like actually being a good teacher, actually teaching the student something, actually making the class fun... but unfortunately.. he is not longer here with the rest of us in the cruel cruel world. Seriously though, I do not believe the school should have put rankings on their teachers, because it just leads to low self-esteem, and low self-esteem in his case lead to his death. Just be aware that your a winner no matter what, yes you are. A winner; You, yes.

9/20/10 Role Of Women/Journal Entry

At this period in time life is hard for all women, They are now devoted to doing extra work during the time that there husbands are away at war. It is a difficult time, and maintaining things can get out of hand; We take a on many jobs in munition factories and in old factories that had been converted from civilian products like automobiles. Which started this stupid thing called the "Rosie the Riverter" phenomenon. Many women offered in community service roles, such as USO and Red Cross while there men were away at war. Thousands of women, even my neighbor employed to fly military aircraft to free up men in combat service and duties, but sooner than later.. marriage came back and motherhood was back into play. Now more than 12 million men are in uniforms, and it frees women of there extra duties. Being a housewife is so much easier because there so was so much spending money available, but it was harder due to the fact that there where shortages, cutbacks in automobile and bus service and migration from farms and towns to munitions center. Many wives tried to relocate near their husbands' training camps as well.

9/15/10 Miracle Landing:

A suicidal man survived a 40-story fall from a building? Then landed on a car? And survived? I personally think he is somewhat of a idiot, being that he wanted to end his life by jumping off a building. Then the sad part about it is that he survived... They should have made a TV show about this. He manages to land in a back seat of a car, if he really wanted to end his life he would of made sure where he jumped off was clear or did it in a more legit manner. Now he has two broken legs, a collasped lung, and a shattered ankle, he's a smart guy.


 * P= You definitely write in a way that is easy and entertaining to read.**
 * C= Watch your run-on sentences. Try to provide more details from the article to support your writing.**