cody+lyman

9/15/10

I never really knew that someone could get so mad at someone for damaging their car when it was their car that saved the persons life. When thomas had jumped it didn't seem as if he had planned out the outcome of his suicidal jump becuase most people would want to die with straight hard ground impact, but when he jumped he landed on a car. The way he landed was very lucky becuase most of the time when you jump from a 40 story building you don't normally land in the same direction you jumped off the building becuase the way that the wind had taken him he had a larger chance of hitting a car than hitting solid ground. As they say stupid is as stupid does. Suicide doesn't always end up as planned. If you are going to do it make sure you have a 100% chance of not living.


 * P = You have a strong ability to summarize.**
 * C = The word is "because." Once you spell it wrong once, it is easy to spell it wrong over and over again. I'm not sure what "Rock star" means at the end of your paragraph... Give me more details to back up your opinions on the subject.**

Sorry Mr. McKenna I'm a Rock Star


 * Cody,**


 * If a Rock Star is someone that doesn't complete their wikispace assignments, then I would say yes, you are a Rock Star. However, I hope you will consider becoming something else instead for the sake of your grade.**


 * --Mr. McKenna**