Francisco+Chinchilla

9/15/10

In New York City a sucidal man jumped off a 40-foot aparment building last week and survived. he landed in the back seat of a Dodge charger. he only had two broken legs a collapsed lung and and a shattered ankle. I think that the guy came out pretty lucky that he has a somewhat soft landing. what got me mad was the fact that the owner of the car got mad at him for destroying her car. she should be happy knowing that she can say that her car saved a life, I know I would. He should feel like an idiot because you shouldn't waste your life and enjoy.


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