Jenn+Lewis

9/15 I read Miracle Landing. In this article a man was attempting to commit suicide, but it failed. He ended up falling on to a lady's car and injuring himself in many ways. The lady's whose car he fell on asked "How he feels now that he made it. Does he feel like an idiot?" I found the lady's comment kind of rude, but at the same time I thought that she had a point. Obviously, commiting suicide is the wrong idea at all times, and now that he has made it I bet he feels stupid about it.

P= Great job quoting from the article. C= Try to pick a point in the article that you feel strongly about and then go more in depth in that direction. Your reaction seems a bit vague.