chelseamillls

9/15/10 miracle landing: that has to be a sign that he survived. that was a really lucky miracle that he recieved.most people who do commit suicide by doing somthing like that end up dieing. also i understand were that women whos car got smushed comes from becuase i would want to know what he was thinking as well. im very sure that he does feel stupid now becuase not only did he do this probly in front of alot of people walkg by but also now he has to pay for the damages to the car. so in the run, he created a bigger mess that he inteded, the lesson we can all learn form this is if your going to commit suicide.... dont jump off a buildingand land on a becuase there is a good chance ull hit a car.

9/25/10-manila: first off i was very suprised that this baby even survived. my stomach dropped after i read the first line" "a baby born on a flight from Bahrain to the Philippines and abandonded in an airplain trashbag". How could you just give birth and then "throw it out"? what would go threw your head? and yeah i understand that the baby might have come from a maid that was raped but you cant just leave it there, put it up for adoption. wouldnt you want to know who you gave life to? who you brought into this world? Even though many of them dont have money or safe jobs, still put it up for adoption.
 * P = You have a good conversational tone to your writing**
 * C = Work on spelling, punctuation and capitalization for next week. Make it look perfect and then we can work from there.**

10/7/10 gay adoption band: this rule is very wrong!!! i feel very strongly about both these topics< gays and adoption! and for one i am adopted into a loving family. there is nothing wrong with being gay in the first place, and i thought everyone got over that problem. now im guessing there are not going to let them adopt? i dont understand why any of this makes sence to them. gays are people to and just becuase they are diffrent they shouldnt be treated diffrently.Kids are put up for adoption for a reason, so have a better life. and people who arnt able to have kids rely on adoption. i just feel its very wrong.


 * Read my comments from last week. Fix the spelling and capitalization. Try giving some more background to the story and then give us your opinion on it.**

11/2/10 honestly i really dont understand this artical is there anyway you can possible give me a diffrent one? i read it at least 4 times and even tryed to other reserch on it from the computer and i still dont understand it.